WWW
- Some attempt to include visual material through the embedded video.
- Some useful observations regarding conventions.
EBI
- There is an awful lot missing here Luke, you should catch up as soon as possible.
- Your analysis of Jessie J is not analysis. You should use headings - mise en scene, cinematography, editing, sound to focus your analysis.
- Make sure you include more visual mareial than just embedded video. Use screen grabs to illustrate particular points.
Effort - UN
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